January 24,2015
On sunday I woke up late because I was tired a lot . I spent time on the bed in the morning.I would like to do the same all day but I did not do it. After lunch I went to bed and I can't sleep because i was thinking about my life. Now i'm unemployed and learning English about 1 year. Sometimes my english progress have been bad but I know I need be patient!I think about improve my english also after that a went to listen a podcast.
At night I spoke with a friend on skype. It was good but I could not speak in english. I had not studied anything.I hope to do it better on the next time
That day I would to slept early but I did not it . I talked to my friends about midnight. after that I went to shower and dinner. I do not remember exactly hours I went to bed but it was too late
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January 24, 2015
On Sunday I woke up late because I was very tired a lot . I spent a lot of time in bed in the morning. I wanted to do that for the rest of the day but I did not do it. After lunch, I went to bed and I could not sleep because I kept thinking about my life. I am unemployed and have been learning English for about 1 year. Sometimes my progress with learning English is been bad but I know I need to be patient! I think thought about improving my English so I listened to a podcast after.At night, I spoke to a friend on Skype. It was good but I could not speak in English. I had not studied anything. I hope I will do better next time.
That day I wanted to sleep early but I didn't. I talked to my friends until about midnight. After that I went to take a shower and ate dinner. I do not remember exactly what time I went to bed but it was very late.
Hello Montalvão!
Most of my corrections were just enhancing the word choice of your sentences. The rest were just punctuation and keeping the verb tenses consistent. Other than that, keep up the good work :)
-Ana
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January 24,2015
On sunday I woke up late because I was very tired. I laid in bed for awhile in the morning.I would have liked to have done the same all day but I did not do it(or just "didn't"). After lunch I went to bed and I couldn't sleep because i was thinking about my life. Now i'm unemployed and have been learning English about 1 year. Sometimes my english progress has been bad but I know I need be patient! I thought about improving my english and after that a went to listen a podcast.At night I spoke with a friend on skype. It was good but I could not speak in english. I had not studied anything.I hope to do it better next time.
That day I would have liked to have went to bed early bit I didn't. . I talked to my friends around midnight. After that I took a shower and ate dinner. I do not remember exactly when I went to bed but it was too late.
Also I is always capitalised if youre talking about yourself I didnt correct it every time. I'm not sure if you already know that.
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