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I introduce myself Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow i have a english test and i know i am good in listening and writting but when i need express my feeling im so bad :( But well, now i going to introduce myself my name is Paola (is a "italian" name but i have never listen before in italian girl) i'm 21 years old , now i'm marketing student , i like play tennis is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or do outdoor activities. I was born in Monterrey but now i live in a place called Villahermosa What more could I add to my presentation? Thanks and have a nice day :)

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I introduce myself

Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow I have an english test and I know I am good at listening and writing but when I need to express my feelings I'm so bad :(

But well, now I'm going to introduce myself my name is Paola (it is an "italian" name but i have never listen before in italian girl)* i'm 21 years old , now I'm marketing student , I like playing tennis, it is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or doing outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now I live in a place called Villahermosa

What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)

*Not sure what you mean here.

Two Tips for You!

1. I is always written as a capital letter, e.g. I went shopping, I went to school. May seem like a small thing but very important to remember with English

2. Make sure to write 'an' when the word after starts with a vowel.    

e.g. An ordinary day, an unusual book

Best of luck with your test.

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I'll introduce myself

Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow i have an english test and i know i am good at listening and writing but when i need to express how I'm feeling (this can also be written by saying just saying "but when I am speaking") I'm so bad :( 


But well, now i am going to introduce myself my name is Paola (it is a "italian" name but i have never listen before in Italian girl) i'm 21 years old , now i'm marketing student , i like play playing tennis it is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or do outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now i live in a place called Villahermosa

What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)

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I introduce myself

Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow i have an english test and i know i am good in listening and writting but when i need express my feeling im so bad :(

But well, now i am going to introduce myself my name is Paola (is a "italian" name but i have never listened before in italian girl) i'm 21 years old , now i'm marketing student , i like playing tennis is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or do outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now i live in a place called Villahermosa

What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)
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I introduce myself

Hi everyone, I'm so nervous because tomorrow I have an English test and I know I am good in listening and writing but when I need to express my feeling is so bad :(

But well, now I going to introduce myself my name is Paola (is an "Italian" name but I have never listened
before in Italian girl) I'm 21 years old , now I'm marketing student , I like to play tennis which is my favorite sport and I enjoy spending time with my family, friends or  to do outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now I live in a place called Villahermosa

What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)

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