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My Short Term Goals I’ve decided to share with some of my goals for this year. I will share five goals of the list that I’d. While the others I am going to write when I achieve them. These five goals are not in order. First, I want always to think and speak positively to, and about, other people. I’m not talking about my friends or family, but about people in general. Second, I want to be more outspoken. I usually open with some parts of my life, but now I want to be outspoken in every aspect of it. Third, I want to master my English speaking and writing. The reason is I’m studying ESL, and I want to teach elementary kids in my country. Therefore, I want to skilled enough to give kids a better English as the one I received. Fourth, I want to travel to a new country this year; I have gone to some countries in Central and South America, but I would love to visit England or U.S.A. Finally, I want to have a better physical shape. At the moment, I’m running and going to the gym, but I want to practice beach volleyball or surfing twice a week.

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My Short Term Goals

I’ve decided to share with some of my goals for this year. I will share five goals off the list that I’d(like to share??). While the others I am going(I would change to: I am going to write the other goals when I achieve them) to write when I achieve them. These five goals are not in order. First, I want always to think and speak positively to, and about, other people. I’m not talking about my friends or family, but about people in general. Second, I want to be more outspoken. I (am) usually open with some parts of my life, but now I want to be outspoken in every aspect of it. Third, I want to master my English speaking and writing. The reason is I’m studying ESL, and I want to teach elementary (school)kids in my country. Therefore, I want to (be) skilled enough to give kids a better English as the one(lessons than) I received. Fourth, I want to travel to a new country this year; I have gone to some countries in Central and South America, but I would love to visit England or the U.S.A. Finally, I want to have a  (we would typically say: get into better physical shape) better physical shape. At the moment, I’m running and going to the gym, but I want to practice beach volleyball or surfing twice a week.


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My Short Term Goals

 

I’ve decided to share with everyone some of my goals for this year. I will share five goals off the list that I have made. The other goals I will write about when I achieve them. These five goals are not in order.

 

1.) I want to always speak positively to other people. I also want to speak and think positively about other people. I’m not talking about doing this only with my friends and family but about doing this with people in general.
2.) I want to be more outspoken. I am usually open with some parts of my life, but now I want to be outspoken in every aspect of my life.
3.) I want to master English speaking and writing. The reason for this is I’m studying ESL and I want to teach elementary school kids in my country. Therefore I want to be skilled enough to give kids better English lessons than the ones I have received.
4.) I want to travel to a new country this year. I have gone to some countries in Central and South America but I would love to visit England or the U.S.A.
5.) I want to get into better physical shape. At the moment, I’m running and going to the gym, but I want to practice beach volleyball or surfing twice a week.

 

Thanks for the friend request. I'm looking forward to practicing Spanish with you and helping you with English. The correction above mine is good, I just did this alternative correction for fun. I corrected it as a numbered list because it might be easier to read. Best of luck with the New Year's Resolutions.

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