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Letter to a confused friend (2nd round) Hi Alex, Congratulations about your marks! It's nice your parents have done you money for spending it in what you want! You're confused because you don't know whether to buy a computer game or to save up more money for go shopping later, do you? From my point of view, you should buy a computer game because I know you and I'm sure you will be happier playing computer games than wearing new clothes. Last week, I went to a mall and I visited a games shop. There were a lot of people because a new computer game was being sold there. I asked the shop assistant about it, and he told me it's the best computer game in the world according to what experts say about it. He also told me that the graphics and soundtrack are fantastic! I hope these pieces of advices are useful for you and I'm looking forward to a reply in which you told me about this famous computer game. Kisses, Laura. 168 words.

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Letter to a confused friend (2nd round)

Hi Alex,

Congratulations about your marks (better: results)! It's nice that your parents have given you money to spend on what (better: whatever) you want!
You're confused because you don't know whether to buy a computer game or to save up more money to go shopping for clothes later, right? From my point of view, you should buy a computer game because I know you and I'm sure you will be happier playing computer games than wearing new clothes.
Last week, I went to a mall and I visited a games shop. There were a lot of people because a new computer game was being sold there. I asked the shop assistant about it, and he told me it's the best computer game in the world according to what experts say about it. He also told me that the graphics and soundtrack are fantastic!
I hope these pieces of advices are useful for you and I'm looking forward to a reply in which you tell me about this famous computer game.
Kisses, Laura.

168 words.

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