Self-introduction
My name's Zhang Jiayun.l'm Shanghainese.After l had graduated from my junior high School.l entered Shanghai Commercial Accounting School.The school lies in the northwest of the city.My major is internation financial.l'm not the best in our class.But l strive to learn.
Maths is the excellentest than other subjests.But my English is so poor.l know English is important.So l supposed to study it hander,and l'm learning English right now.
l hope my English as good as Maths.l wish my dream come ture.
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Self-introduction
My name's Zhang Jiayun.l'm Shanghainese.(After graduating from junior high)After l had graduated from my junior high school, l entered Shanghai Commercial Accounting School.The school lies/is located in the northwest of the city.My major is international finance**Math
l hope my English will be as good as my Math.l wish my dream will come true.
** You could also say: Compared to other subjects, math is my favorite. / I am better at math than all other subjects. ( All depends on what you're trying to say about Math.)
***I'm learning English right now and I know it's an important subject so I will try and study harder so that, one day, it will be as good as my Math.
Best of luck with your studies!
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