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IELTS Writing Task 1: Comparison Diagram

This is an essay for IELTS exam writing task 1. I hHope someone could give me some advice on my work. what I did. Your help is greatly appreciated!!!!!

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The first picture shows the current layout of the ground floor of a house, and the second picture illustrates the changes that will be made to the floor.

The significant changes we can notice in the second picture are that the existing hall is going to be removed, along with the internal wall next to the living room being torn down and the relocation of the stairs.

The stairs will be moved slightly away from where they are now to the corner of the living room, and as storage under the stairs will not be included in the new floor plan, even with the longer staircase, the living room will become more spacious than it was used to be.

The doors to the kitchen and the living room are now facing each other now, but they will be relocated and to be placed together on one side connecting the kitchen and the new living room. We can also notice that tThere will also be a new set of furniture layout in the kitchen. Other than that, the entrances of the house will remain the same.

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Very nice!

The sentence: "We can also notice that there will be a new set of furniture in the kitchen." can be said a few different ways. Here are some other ways to say it.

"There will also be a new furniture layout in the kitchen."

"Also, the furniture in the kitchen will get a new layout."

"The layout in the kitchen will change."

Generally, the kitchen will have appliances, like a refrigerator, dishwasher, and a stove, as appliances refer to electrical or gas-powered cooking elements and the refrigerator and other items like a toaster (for bread) or a waffle maker (for waffles!). Furniture in the kitchen refers to a table and chairs, a free-standing table (tall table) for eating things quickly, and perhaps a sideboard which holds your plates, cups, and possibly silverware (knife, fork, spoon, etc.). 

I hope this isn't too extra information! Your english is very good and if you spoke the english like how you originally typed it you would be understood but people would know your english is not perfect. That is ok! Way to go! Good luck in your studies!

IELTS Writing Task 1: Comparison Diagram

Your English is very good and it is to a very high level! The only issues you had were with vocabulary but they will come with time if you keep practicing your writing and speaking skills.  Good luck with your English studies!