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What Are Some Important Qualities Of A Good Supervisor (boss)? (TOEFL essay) What important quality should have a perfect boss? This is a very deep question. Did you notice sometime how employees hate their boss. I thinks it happens because the boss has lack of certain character and professional traits. I will try to describe some of them that are very important in my opinion. The perfect boss should be skillful, fair and ambitious. First of all, employees or colleagues have to feel that their boss is more skilled than their. This is a very important for success work. For instance, if I know that my boss knows more than me in certain area, I will trust him. A good boss has to have more experience than me, more knowledge than me, because only in that case I will respect him or her. Second important quality for a good boss is fairness. People are very sensitive about these things. For example, my college and I have equal qualifications and the same experience, but my colleague has more salary than me because the boss somehow love her more. It is unfair. This situation will cause a bad atmosphere in an office and furthermore the efficiency of work will decrease. Finally, I believe that a good boss should be ambitious. This quality is really necessary, because the more ambitious is the boss, the more successful he or she will. Obviously, people who have a lack of ambitiousness never become big bosses. This trait allows him or her to go further and further to the dream. I think a good boss dreams about success, good, friendly and efficient crew and achieving the goals. In conclusion, based on the argument explore above I can say that a good boss should have a lot of necessary qualities, but the most important are - skillfulness, fairness and ambitiousness.

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What important quality should have a perfect boss? This is a very deep question. Did you notice sometimes how employees hate their boss. I thinks it happens because the boss has lack of certain characteristics and professional traits. I will try to describe some of them that are very important in my opinion. The perfect boss should be skillful, fair and ambitious.
First of all, employees or colleagues have to feel that their boss is more skilled than they are. This is a very important for successful work. For instance, if I know that my boss knows more than me in a certain area, I will trust him. A good boss has to have more experience , and more knowledge than I. Only in that case will I respect him or her.
Second important quality for a good boss is fairness. People are very sensitive about certain things. For example, my collegee and I have equal qualifications and the same experience, but my colleague has a higher salary because the boss somehow loves her more. It is unfair. This situation will cause a bad atmosphere or hostile work environment in the office. It will effect the efficiency of work that will be done.
Finally, I believe that a good boss should be ambitious. This quality is really necessary, because the more ambitious the boss is, the more successful he or she will be. Obviously, people who have a lack of ambition never become big bosses. This trait allows him or her to go further and further towards his or her dream. I think a good boss dreams about a successful business; good, friendly and efficient crew; and achieving his goals.
In conclusion, I can say that a good boss should have a lot of particular qualities, but the most important are – business skills, fairness and being ambitious.

 

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