My Favorite Song
This is my favorite song. Write in Bahasa Indonesia but I have translated it to English for practice. Correct my grammar, please :)
My phone ring made me smile in the morning
You told me that we met in your dream last night
I don't know why do I feel you are here
Your laugh entertain me when I am alone
I am here and you are there
We meet only via sounds
But I always wait the time for we meet
Although you are so far away
But we see the same sky
Out of sight, near by heart
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My Favorite Song
This is my favorite song. It's written in Bahasa Indonesia but I have translated it to English for practice. Correct my grammar, please :)
My phone ringing makes me smile in the morning
You told me that we met in your dream last night
I don't know why I feel like you are here
Your laugh entertains me when I am alone
I am here and you are there
We meet only via sounds
But I always wait the time for we meet
Even though you are far away
we see the same sky
Out of sight, near by heart (Near by heart sounds strange but is ok in song lyrics)
Thank you for your correction
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