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Zedd live!
I went to ZEDD live in Japan!
This is was an awesome show...
I like sounds music he makes.
His songs always make me my soul ecstasy. feel ecstatic. ( Don't get me wrong for what I say mistake my meaning.)
I can't wait for the next show!
I love EDM !!
-I changed "is" to "was" because in the sentence you used the wrong for of the verb "to be"(am,is,are,was).
-You have to use the word "a" so that the reader can understand you only went to the one show, and you have to change the word "a" to "an" because your next word in the sentecnce starts with a vowel.
-I changed "sounds" to "music" so you can be more specific.
-I changed "song" to "songs" because you have to use the plural form of a noun when you mean more than 1.
-I changed "me" to "my" because my is the form of "I" that shows possession, as in you own the soul you are talking about.
-I changed "ecstacy" to "feel ecstatic" because ecstacy is a feeling meaning happy and you have to change the adjective to match the rest of the sentence.
-"Don't mistake my meaning." is an easier way to say that sentence and is more commonly used.
Final Edit:
I went to ZEDD live in Japan!
This was an awesome show...
I like music he makes.
His songs always make my soul feel ecstatic. (Don't mistake my meaning.)
I can't wait for the next show!
I love EDM !!
You made a wonderful attempt! Even though you made some mistakes I was still able to understand what you meant! Keep up the good work :D also ask me if you need anymore help!
Zedd live!
I went to ZEDD live in Japan!This is awsome show...
I like sounds he makes.
His song always makes me soul ecstasy.(dont get me wrong for what I say)
I can't wait next show!
I love EDM !!
Corrections here:
This is an awesome show....
I like the sounds he makes.
His songs always make my sould...
Hope it helps!
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