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self-introduction 2 My hobby is going camping . My husband likes fishing so we always stay in campsite near the ocean. We need to bring both camping and fishing equipment for our whole family. They are a lot of baggage every time. My favorite place for camping is Kushimoto town in Wakayama prefecture . It is located in a southernmost of main islands of Japan. It takes about 5 hours from my house to the campsite. It is warm temperature through the year and the ocean is very beautiful . We can watch many beautiful stars in the evening. It is not crowded and there are many fishes . When we can catch some fishes , we cook them in the campsite for dinner. We have been to camping five or six times a year until my oldest son goes to junior high school. However now we can not go camping many times because he is very busy for club activity, preparing test and homework .

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My hobby is going camping .
My husband likes fishing so we always stay in the/a campsite near the ocean.
We need to bring both camping and fishing equipment for our whole family.
They is a lot of baggage every time.
My favorite place for camping is Kushimoto town in Wakayama prefecture .
It is located in one of the southernmost main islands of Japan.
It takes about 5 hours from my house to the campsite.
It is temperature is warm throughout the year and the ocean is very beautiful .
We can watch many beautiful stars in the evening.
It is not crowded and there are many fish. (fishes is correct but it sounds odd-most people use fish) 
When we can catch some fish , we cook them in the campsite for dinner.

We had been going camping five or six times a year until my oldest son started junior high school. Now we can not go camping as often because he is very busy with club activities, preparing for tests and homework. 

 

Nicely done :)

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