TV in my country

I am amazed how TV in my country is displaying a lot of sexual movies and programs. In Last night I watched ‘Sense 8’. There were many scenes that showed naked women and men were in bed doing sexual things having sex.  I feel strongly that TV should 'change their behavior' - ( TV is an innanimate object, therefore has no behavioural characteristics.  You need to be a bit clearer here what you want to say e.g TV should stop showing gratuitous sex scenes) just stop thinking about the money. they  It needs to care about people and be more educational, to be a benefit for watchers 'in their future' - (I am not entirely sure I understand what you mean by 'their'. Are you writing about all TV viewers, adults, teens or children?) . Also, in my opinion, the watchers should watch educational programs at least two hours a day. It is hard to change the TV’s owner, but you need to change yourself from and stop watching violence and sexual movies and start watching to educational programs or documentaries.

Well done. You have made a very good attempt at expressing a point of view. 

If you have any questions about my corrections, please write and ask. 

My corrections have been grammatical and aimed to help you consider when to be explicit. This is a key feature of writing; especially a point of view. Who is it aimed at? What is it about? Why are you writing it? What do you hope to achieve through getting your point across?

I hope this helps.