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My journey
I went to Arequipa because it's beautiful and the food is delicious. I loved the weather because it was cooler. Then I visited different places like the volcano Colca, later, we saw some animals. Then we traveled to Paracas. It was hotter than Arequipa. I liked the beaches because they are the best. I liked the food and the best dish was rice with seafood. Then the next day, we went to a vineyard and met over wine and pisco. Finally, we visited some crafts shops and central square.Great work! Tu ingles es muy bien...
-Rodney
My journey
I went to Arequipa because it's beautiful and has the most delicious food. I loved the weather because was colder. Then I visited different places like the Colca Canyon, later we saw some animals. Then we traveled to Paracas, because it is hotter than Arequipa. I liked beaches there which are the best. I also like food there. The best dish for me was rice with seafood. Then the next day we went to a vineyard and saw the process of making wine and pisco. Finally we visited some crafts shops and the central square
My journey
I went to Arequipa because it's beautiful and has food the most delicious food. I loved the weather because it's very was colder. Then I visited different places like the volcano Colca Canyon, later we saw some animals. Then we traveled to Paracas, because it is hotter than Arequipa. I liked the beaches there which are the best. too i I also liked food there. for me The best dish for me it was rice with seafood. Then the next day we went to a vineyard and met saw the process of making wine and pisco. Finally we visited some crafts shops and the central square.
My Journey
I went to Arequipa because it's beautiful and has the most delicious food. I loved the weather there because it's much colder. I visited different places like the volcano Colca. Later on we saw some animals. Then we traveled to Paracas because it is hotter than Arequipa. I liked the beaches beacause they are the best. I liked the food and for me the best dish was rice with seafood. The next day we went to a vineyard and met over wine and pisco. Finally, we visited some crafts shops and the central square.
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