the first day
l still is tring to losing weight today.My weight has growing rose for a long~long time.Sometimes, l iust wonder why the only people who can‘t lost the weight is me.(this sentence must have many mistake,i thought)But,when l see the pockets(?) of crisps and many other snacks such as cookies, l know the reason.(un,sad)
Tomorrow will be a good day！ I hope that there will be a kind person to correct my words,thaks ^-^
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tThe first day
l'm still is tring trying to losing lose weight today.My weight has been growing rose rising for a long, long time. Sometimes, l iust wonder why the only people who can‘t lost the weight is me. I'm the only person who can't lose weight (this sentence must have many mistakes, I thought think). But when l see the pockets(?) packets of crisps, and many other snacks, such as cookies, l know the reason. (?un,sad?)
Tomorrow will be a good day！ I hope that there will be a kind person to correct my words, thanks ^-^
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