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Imaginative Story; Shay was doing her laundries at the time her kids were coming home from school. She became a homemaker after her second kid Tommy was born. Until then, she had been working as a business manager of a food company, which currently makes profit of 5 millions a month. It was a thing that she felt proud of working in such a big company. She lived in plenty with enough salary and felt satisfied of security for her role in there. This apparent well-off life of her, however, started to change since she had been pregnant. Physical burden from the pregnancy was somehow bearable for her, but the great concern about her children's psychological wellness was what made her quit her job. Since she already felt uncomfortable to have her first child Rooney spend most time of day in childcare center, it came as way heavier doing the another same thing to her second child. So she made up her mind to spend more time with her kids. It was never easy to decide, of course, but she knew how important it was to give them sufficient maternal love and how much it would affect their life in the future. She has no regrets for her big decision.

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Imaginative Story;

Shay was doing her laundry at the same time her kids were coming home from school. She became a homemaker after her second kid, Tommy, was born. Until then, she had been working as a manager of a food company, which currently makes a profit of 5 million a month. She felt proud working for such a big company. She lived in plenty, with enough salary and felt satisfied in the security of her role there.

This apparent well-off life of hers, however, started to change once she had gotten pregnant. The physical burden from the pregnancy was somehow bearable, but the great concern about her children's psychological wellness was what made her quit her job.

Since she already felt uncomfortable to have her first child Rooney spend most of the day in the childcare center, it was much worse for her second child.

So she made up her mind to spend more time with her kids. It was not easy to decide, of course, but she knew how important it was to give them sufficient maternal love and how much it would affect their life in the future. She has no regrets for her big decision.

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