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The bar chart illustrated --> illustrateS the difference in how different of expenditures on food, housing, transportation, healthcare and clothing among 5 --> four countries (THE United StateS, Canada, THE United Kingdom and Japan) in 2009.
Overall, people in that 5 --> those four countries spent more money for food, housing and transportation than health care and clothing. (<-- GOOD: KEY POINT - NOTE THE GENERAL TREND OF THE DATA FIRST) It is clear from the chart that the AmericanS had the highest percentage of expenditure for housing whereas THE United Kingdom paid the least money for health care.
In termS of housing, the United Stage’s proportion of spending was about 26% of total expenditure in 2009. The United Kingdom and Japan followed , with 24% and 22%, respectively. <-- good language! Canada had the lowest housing share at 21%. Similarly, Japanese paid more concern TO on food and spent --> dedicated (better than "spent... on expenditure") about 23% expenditure on it. The United Kingdom had the second highest share at 20%, while Canada and United State with --> had 15% and 14%, respectively. However, the Canada’s spending for transportation was highest (20%) between 5 --> among the four countries. The United State and the United Kingdom had THE next highest transportation shares, 17% and 15%, respectively. Japan had the lowest at 10%.
In ON the other hand, the expenditure for health care and clothing was lowest (less than 10%) in all 5 countries. In United State, 7% was the percentage of spending for health care, versus 4% in Canada and Japan. The lowest proportion of spending was United Kingdom. Expenditure for clothing was less than 5% in Canada and United Kingdom, and accountED for 4% in United State and Japan.
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