Repair of my down jacket
It snowed a lot in Tokyo on Monday. Next day, when I was riding a bicycle on the snowy road, my bicycle slipped and I fell off my bicycle. I was injured and a right wrist part of my favorite down jacket tore. When I took it to a repair shop, repair cost was same as a new jacket. So I decided to repair it myself. The result of repair was better than I expected.
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Repair of my down jacket
It snowed a lot in Tokyo on Monday. The next day, when I was riding a bicycle on the snowy road, my bicycle slipped and I fell off my bicycle. I was injured and the right wrist part of my favorite down jacket tore. When I took it to a repair shop, the repair cost was same as a new jacket, so I decided to repair it myself. The result of repair was better than I expected.
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Repair of my down jacket
It snowed a lot in Tokyo on Monday. The next day, when I was riding a bicycle on the snowy road, my bicycle slipped and I fell off my bicycle. I was injured and the right wrist part of my favorite down jacket tore. When I took it to a repair shop, the repair cost was the same as a new jacket. So I decided to repair it myself. The result of my repair was better than I expected.Congratulations, it gives you a certain feeling of satisfaction, doesn't it?
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