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She came home and became angry cause as or since a lot of the trash was here and there (might just say everywhere). She spent two days throughly cleaning the apartment after the party but for someone it takescosted less then 10 minutes to clean just by just turn stuffs upside down for a quick clean. She pulled herself together to channeled her perverse aggrivation or frustration feeling into cleaning the housing again.
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She came home and became angry cause a lot of trash was here and there. She spent two days cleaning the apartment after the party but for someone it costed (cost)less then 10 minutes to turn stuffs upside down. [Pulled herself together she channeled her perverse feeling into cleaning the housing again] "You need to rephrase this cause the meaning is not clear enough
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