Search from various English teachers...
South Korea flagKyeonghee
concept Now i'm preparing of the presentation. i want to write a complete stence. concept Passion and energy toward their goal and then, pleasure and exciting when people reached that. Express emotional sides of people. How can i express my concept? i'd be glad of your help ☺

Corrections · 3

0

Now I'm preparing for the presentation.

I want to write a complete sentence. ← "Sentence" meaning "문장"? I wasn't 100% sure.


Concept
- Passion and energy toward their goal and then pleasure and excitement when they reach that.
- Express emotional sides of people. ← I'm not sure how to translate this properly.

 

How can I express my concept?
I'd be glad of your help ☺

 

---

 

This was pretty good! Don't forget to use capital letters and punctuation for new sentences or paragraphs.

For example:

"C" instead of "c"

"A" instead of "a"

 

I tried to make your sentences sound more natural. Hope this helps!

0

I'd appreciate your help ☺ ← Sounds more natural and uses proper English grammar.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today