Why do we need friends?
No one can deny the fact that friendship is very important in our life. And, no one can deny say that they have no friend? However, how important is friendship to make us need friends?
Firstly, friendship helps reduce suffering our life. We'll be not alone anh our friends will be people sharing them with us.
Secondly, friendship encourages us to overcome difficults in our life and bring us optimistic thought
Thirdly, friendship will correct our mistake and tell us how way to correct the.
Finally, friendship is source of happiness. They share with us and give ne the most interesting things in the world.
However, to have true friendship is not easy thing. But, let's believe that we'll have a true friendship if we know share.
Do you agree?
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Why do we need friends?
No one can deny the fact that the*1 friendship is very important in our life. And, no one can deny say that they have no friend(s)*2?. However, how important is friendship is for us to make us need friends?
Firstly, the friendship helps reduce suffering from our lifeves. We'll not be not alone and our friends will be the people who sharinge them with usour lives.
Secondly, the friendship encourages us to overcome difficulties in our lifeves and brings us optimistic thoughts.
Thirdly, the friendship will correct our mistakes and tells us the way how way to correct them.
Finally, the friendship is the source of happiness. TheyIt is shared with us and gives neus the most interesting things in the world.
However, to have a true friendship is not an easy thing. But, let's believe that we'll have a true friendships if we know shareing.
Do you agree with my opinion ?
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*1 The definite article is needed before the singular form of a noun.
*2 It's more usual to add 's' in the phrase "have no ...s".
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