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The internet : a curse or a blessing In my opinion the internet it’s a curse for who depending on it, when somebody make the internet as the only source of knowledge or information , he is leading himself to a storm of confusions especially in getting the informations like news from different sources give rise to the rumors . I will making a comparison between scientific books and the scientific website, whereas the ideas are reliable in sort of the sequence and the connection between the informations, that makes the demarche clear in books, however the information on websites is insufficient and the demarche is incomplete and not clear. Moreover, the internet is a tool of losing time for doing nothing, at all, especially in minor categories, you can’t survey or control what they doing on the internet it’s not secure at all for children. Even there are many good things in using internet, for example, making the world a small place or facilitate the communication or the openness to different cultures all that doesn’t make it a blessing because the fact and the consequences guide to the only fact that the internet change our life and make it worse. WROTE BY: OUSSAMA JEMILI

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The internet : a curse or a blessing

In my opinion the internet it’s  is a curse for those who depending on it, when somebody makes the internet as their only source of knowledge or information , he is leading himself to a storm of confusions especially in getting the informations like news from different sources - this gives rise to the rumors .

I will be making a comparison between scientific books and the scientific websites, whereas the ideas are reliable in sort of the sequence and the connection between the informations, that makes the demarche demarkation clear in books, however the information on websites is insufficient and the demarche demarkation is incomplete and not clear.

Moreover, the internet is a tool of losing/wasting [wasting time is better] time for doing nothing at all, especially in minor categories, you can’t survey or control what they are doing on the internet it’s not secure at all for children.
Even though there are many good things in using the internet, for example, making the world a small place or facilitating the communication or the openness to different cultures, all that doesn’t make it a blessing because the fact and the consequences guide to the only fact that the internet changes our life and make it worse.



WROTE BY: OUSSAMA JEMILI

 

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Very good Oussama, it's very difficult to know when to use "the" and when not to.  "the internet" but not "scientific websites".  You are writing English to a very high level.  Keep it up!

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