Making a surprise

I and my girl friend are both medical staff and it is hard for us to spend time together. The other night, I happened to see an advert (the commercial advertisement) on TV about the Irish step dance and they are coming to Taiwan in this February. I was so excited although the leader of this group, Michael Flatley, has retired. It is still a good chance to watch such a wonderful show without going abroad.

In addition, the Valentine's Day is coming soon so I had a plan to make a surprise to celebrate it. Now, the first step for me is to surf the website to check up the proper price and available time for me and my girl friend. Second, booking the tickets and third, to check our schedules. Nevertheless, I still have no idea to come up with how to let her receive my secret present.

Hello Eric,

That sounds like a wonderful suprise for your girlfriend, why don't you just tell her you are going out for a quiet dinner for Valentines Day and then lead her on to the theatre instead?

Just a few small corrections, as there are just two of you we say 'both' instead of 'all', all is for greater numbers. I added the words 'an advert', just because it sounds much more natural.

Hope this helps

Bob