Music in life

No one can deny the fact that music plays an important role in our life. It reaches and touches our heart with ever-lasting and unforgettable melodies. Music helps us to overcome difficulties in the life. It also brings us better thoughts and wonderful feelings, giving us a more beautiful world and encouraging us in life.
Music is an endless inspiration in our life.

Hello Đặng Quỳnh,

I agree, life would definitely be so rich or enjoyable without music. There are a couple of small spelling mistakes and in the last part , encouraging is part of the original phrase (It also brings us better thoughts and feelings) so needs to be the same form.

Hope this helps

Bob