My sister - in- law
She’s just come back VietNam after three year temporary work in Korea. She worked in a small company, it’s the job of Mushroom Packer to classify, check, label and wrap it up ready for dispatch.
you can see she’s still young although her works is hard, sometimes she have to shift work and I see her patient :)
She looks like Korean, especially she’s got small eyes and roundish face, so special ^^ I received a backpack and some flowers and strawberries seeds, why does she knows I also like that? I hope I have a good relationship with her.
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My sister - in- law
My sister-in-law, who looks Korean with those eyes and round face, has just come back to Vietnam after working at a small company in Korea for three years. She was as a mushroom packer who classified, labeled and packed mushrooms ready for delivery.
As you can see in the picture, she is still young. Her job was hard, and she had to adjust a lot. But she had been really patient, too.
She brought me back a backpack and some flower and strawberry seeds. How does she know I like them? I really appreciate the gifts!
I hope I will always have a good relationship with her.
[Hopefully, I didn't add too much or misunderstand some parts of the original entry. ^^ My corrections are long, but sometimes in writin, sentences do not need to be long. They can be short and simple enough to be understandable. The longer the sentences, the more errors in grammar can be found. ^^]
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yes i think she has got is correct, but thank both of you :)
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"She's got" is also correct, not "she got". If you use past tense to describe somebody, it means that person is dead, so you should use present tense for people who are still alive at the moment you're describing them. "She's got" = "she has got" = "she has"
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- three years
- she got, not "she's got"
- just "Why did she know?", yr sentences was translate word by word from VNmese to Eng
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