Our Cats
Cats are very lovable
Cats are so adorable
But then,do not make them hit
Unless you want their sharp teeth.
Cats are so very fluffy
Cats are domestically
But then,do not make them growl
Unless you want their sharp claws.
So let us love our cute cats
Dont enslave but give them blast
But please!do not make them wrath
Or else they'll seek a new path.
Forgive me from my awkward entry.
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Thanks.
As for your question sir.
Yes, blast that means an enjoyable moments.
Is it inappropriate to use that word?
In 'do not make them hit'
Yes, thats it
In 'do not make them wrath'
I really want to change the word wrath cuz I think its unsuitable..
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One more thing. What do you mean by 'blast' in the last stanza? Something that gives great pleasure, as in "have a blast"? Or something altogether different?
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Very cute poem! What do you mean by "do not make them hit"? Don't hit cats? Also, the line "do not make them wrath" needs to be rephrased. You have a couple of options, for example, "do not make then angry," or "do not incur/provoke their wrath." :)
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