I need to write more

I was just be scolded by a friend. She tells told me that if I want to be successful in at learning English I have to write as much as I can. At first I didn´t took take her seriously but then I realized that she is right, this is why I am writing this right now.

As I don't know what to write in about at this moment so I'll talk about the dance lessons I just have fisnished finished. I learned to dance "salsa", a very popular dance in my country. The lessons were very nice and I had a really good time there. My teacher was very nice. She taught me a lot of things, like how to keep up with the steps and how to make turns. She has the blue hair blue (or green or some color inbetween those), I like it.
Sadly, the leassons lessons came to an end and I was a little sad because it was a fun time. I rememeber told telling my teacher that I was very confortable dancing with her but maybe when if I would have had to dance with other another partner I'd be nervous and, for because of that, make some mistakes. She told me that everything would be fine and that I needed to be relax. I haven't had the opportunity of to dance with someone else. I wonder if I will do it all right (or alright).

I need to write more

I just be scolded by a friend. She tells me that if I want to succes in learning English I have to write as much as I can. At first I didn´t took her seriously but then I realized that she is right, this is why I am writing this right now.

As I don't know what to write in this moment I'll talk about the dace lessons I just have fisnished. I learnt to dance "salsa", a very popular dance in my country. The lessons were very nice I had a really god time there, my teacher was very nice. She taught me a lot of things like how to keep the step and how to make turns. She has the hair blue (or green or some color between those), I like it.
Sadly, the leassons came to an end and I was a little sad because it was a fun time. I rememeber told my teacher that I was very confortable dancing with her but maybe when I would have to dance with other partner I'd be nervous and, for that, make some mistakes. She told me that everything would be fine and that I needed to be relax. I haven't had the opportunity of dace with someone else, I wonder if I will do it all right.

I was just scolded by a friend.  She told me that if I want to be successfull learning English I have to write as much as I can. At first I didnt take her serious but then I realized that she is right, this is why I am writing right now.

Since I dont know what to write at this moment, I'll talk about the dance lessons I have just finished.  I learned to dance "salsa", a very popular dance in my country. The lessons were very nice I had a really good time there, my teacher was very nice. She taught me a lot of things like how to keep the step and how to make turns.  She has blue hair (or green or some color between those) I like it. Sadly, the lessons came to an end and I was a little sad because it was a fun time.  I remember telling my teacher that I was very comfortable dancing with her but maybe when I would have to dance with another partner I'd be nervous and make some mistakes.  She told me that everthing would be fine and that I needed to relax.  I haven't had the opportunity to dance with anyone else, I wonder if I will do it all right