My ideal workplace

I want a place to work, where the focus is placed in the final product, with quality, the lastest technologies, always questioning and seeking the best ways to do the stuff, where people are treated with dignity, not concerned about on what they are wearing, on or where they are doing their jobs, with the enough flexibility that makes it possible to fit their personal lives with their duties, accepting there are of many kinds of people with different weaknesses, strengths and point of view.

My ideal workplace

I want a place to work, where the focus is placed on the final product, with quality, latest technologies, always questioning and seeking the best ways to do the stuff. A place where people are treated with dignity, not concerned about on what they are wearing or where they are doing their jobs, with the enough flexibility that makes it possible to fit their personal lives in with their duties. A place that accepts that there are many kinds of people with different weaknesses, strengths and points of view.

Hello Javier, 

Nice text but you need to break some sentences into smaller sentences to make them more natural - we don't normally have so many commas in a sentence in English.

I hope you manage to find a place like this to work.

Bob