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Sleep Time Oh, that's nice. It's sleep time. I wonder if I will have a good sleep night. Well, I go to my bed. Actually I sleep in a bunk, and I prefer to sleep on the bottom bunk. Also there is a fan, and when my sister turns on it I can't sleep in account of noise. She looks like it's always heat dying. I need to close the door, because there is always someone doing something in the living room. Oh, my God! Well, I will try to sleep again. Now I'm listening a buzz fly. No! I wonder when I will finally sleep.

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Sleep Time

Oh, that's nice. It's sleep time finally time for bed.
I wonder if I will have a good sleep night night's rest.
Well, I need to go to my bed.
Actually I sleep in a bunk, and I prefer to sleep on the bottom bunk, while my sister has the top bunk. (Do you share a room with your sister? if so add this line to bring her into the story.) 
Also There is a fan in our room, and when my sister turns on it I can't sleep in account because of the noise. She always looks like she is it's always heat dying of heat.
I am sensitive to sound when I sleep, so I need to close the door, because there is always someone doing something in to stop the noise coming from the living room. Oh, my God!
Well, I will try to sleep again, however I am now I'm listening a buzz fly buzz around my room. No!
I wonder when I will finally get to sleep.

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Sleep Time
Oh, that's nice. It's finally time for bed.
I wonder if I will have a good night's rest.
I need to go to bed.
I sleep on the bottom bunk, while my sister has the top bunk.
There is a fan in our room, and when my sister turns on it I can't sleep because of the noise. She always looks like dying of heat.
I am sensitive to sound when I sleep, so I need to close the door to stop the noise coming from the living room.
I will try to sleep again, however I am now listening a fly buzz around my room.
I wonder when I will finally get to sleep.

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