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the fish 试翻译姚贝娜《鱼》 I am a fish looking at you who are being out of the tank. Taping on the glass,you smile to me and leave. I Swim and swim, almost forgetting you quickly, even the distance of you and me. Cuddling your reflection in the water, I will look forward to you again close to me. I am eager to lie in your warm palm to feel you,hug you and kiss you. It's a pity that I can only swim a lot pretending to be a fish which only has seven seconds of memory. I am a fish, a fish...... I am a fish, so I don't understand your words. I am keeping silence in the water to breath and do not want to close my eyes. While I swim and swim , I'll remember you and have you every expression. The water comes into my eyes with silence quietly It makes you fuzzy and separat you from me. I am so eager to lie in your warm palm, to feel you ,hug you and kiss you. kiss you..... It's a pity that I can only swim a lot Pretending to be a fish which only has seven seconds of memory ..... I am a fish , Only have seven seconds of memory

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the fish

试翻译姚贝娜《鱼》

I am a fish
looking at you who are being out of outside the tank.
Tapping on the glass, you smile to me and leave.

I swim and swim, almost forgetting you quickly, -> forgetting you as soon as you leave (??)
even the distance of you and me between us.
Cuddling your reflection in the water,
I will look forward to having you close to me again.

I am eager to lie in your warm palm
to feel you, hug you and kiss you.
It's a pity that I can only swim a lot endlessly
pretending to be a fish which only has seven seconds of memory.
I am a fish, a fish......

I am a fish, so I don't understand your words.
I am keeping silence, breathing in the water to breath
and I do not want to close my eyes.

While I swim and swim , I'll remember you
and have you your every expression.
The water comes into my eyes
with silence silently, quietly
It makes you fuzzy and separates you from me.

I am so eager to lie in your warm palm,
to feel you, hug you and kiss you.
kiss you.....

It's a pity that I can only swim and swim a lot
Pretending to be a fish
which only has seven seconds of memory .....
I am a fish , Only have seven seconds of memory

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