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Correcting poetry is difficult, but I'll do my best...
the fish
试翻译姚贝娜《鱼》
I am a fish
looking at you who are being out of outside the tank.
Tapping on the glass, you smile to me and leave.
I swim and swim, almost forgetting you quickly, -> forgetting you as soon as you leave (??)
even the distance of you and me between us.
Cuddling your reflection in the water,
I will look forward to having you close to me again.
I am eager to lie in your warm palm
to feel you, hug you and kiss you.
It's a pity that I can only swim a lot endlessly
pretending to be a fish which only has seven seconds of memory.
I am a fish, a fish......
I am a fish, so I don't understand your words.
I am keeping silence, breathing in the water to breath
and I do not want to close my eyes.
While I swim and swim , I'll remember you
and have you your every expression.
The water comes into my eyes
with silence silently, quietly
It makes you fuzzy and separates you from me.
I am so eager to lie in your warm palm,
to feel you, hug you and kiss you.
kiss you.....
It's a pity that I can only swim and swim a lot
Pretending to be a fish
which only has seven seconds of memory .....
I am a fish , Only have seven seconds of memory
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