Horses

Hello!
I want to tell you about my work with horses. I have loved them since childhood. There are They have so much power and grace in their movement movies and I am impressed with their kindness, intelligence and sometimes cunning, because they can feel the fear or uncertainty of the rider, so horses like to test new riders. Of course, I also passed through this ordeal, when my horse didn't listen to me and tried to take the reins, wouldn't didn't executed commands or passed ?? me during the canter. When I was inexperienced I cried and beat the horse. Now I've realised it was blunder and I feel ashamed of these my actions. I understand horses have feelings and feel pain. They recognize hate speech and respond appropriately. A rider must be able to properly give commands properly and gently but firmly insist on pursue the obedience of the horse. Horses understand your care and love. If I want to live and work with them in harmony, I must be gentle and patient.

Good work.  I don't understand what you were trying to say about cantering.

Horses

Hello!
I want to tell you about my work with horses. I have loved them since childhood. There is so much power and grace in their moves and I am impressed with their kindness, intelligence and sometimes cunning, because they can feel the fear or uncertainty of the rider, so horses like to test new riders.

Of course, I also passed through this ordeal, when my horse didn't listen to me and tried to take the reins, didn't execute the commands or passed me during the canter. When I was inexperienced I cried and beat the horse. Now I realised it was a blunder and I feel ashamed of these actions. I understand that horses have feelings and suffer pain. They recognize hateful speech and respond appropriately.

A rider must be able to  give commands properly and gently but firmly pursue the obedience of the horse. Horses understand your care and love. If I want to live and work with them in harmony, I must be gentle and patient.

Hello Anastasia,

It sounds like you have a good understanding of these magnificent creatures, they each have their own character! There are a few corrections and one part (in orange) that I didn't understand. Verbs like 'try' and 'cry' change to -y, + ied in the past tense. There are also a few spelling mistakes.

Hope this helps

Bob

Horses

Hello!
I want to tell you about my work experience with horses. I love them since childhood. There are is so much power and grace in their movies and yet I am impressed with their kindness, intelligence and sometimes cunningness. because Horses they can feel sense the fear or uncertainty of the rider, and so horses they like to test new riders. Of course, I also needed to passed through this ordeal, in my case when my horse didn't listen to me and tryied to take the reins, didn't executed commands (?or passed me during the canter?). When I was inexperienced I cryied and beat the horse. Now I realised it was blunder a mistake and I feel ashamed of these (my) actions. I understand that horses have feelings and feel pain. They recognize anger in our voice hate speech and respond appropriately. The rRider must be able to properly give commands and gently but firmly obtain pursue the obedience of the horse. Horses understand your care and love. If I want to live and work with them in harmony, I must be gentle and patient.

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Horses

Hello!
I want to tell you about my work with horses. I  have loved them since I was a child.childhood. They're are  so much powerful and graceful in their movies when they move. and I am impressed with their kindness, intelligence and sometimes cunning behaviour, because they can feel the fear or uncertainty of the rider, so horses like to test new riders. Of course, I also passed through this ordeal, when my horse didn't listen to me and tryed to take the reins, didn't executed commands or passed me during the canter. When I was inexperirenced I cried and beat the horse. Now I realised it was a blunder (you could also mistake) and I feel ashamed of these actions. I understand horses have feelings and that they feel pain. They recognize hateful (or you could say angry) speech and respond appropriately.  The rider must be able to properly give commands and gently but firmly pursue the obedience of the horse. Horses understand your care and love. If I want to live and work with them in harmony, I must be gentle and patient.