My family.

Hello, my name is Silvia. I´m from Madrid but nowadays I´m living in Ciudad Real. When I moved here, I didn´t like it at all, but now I think it´s a great city with such a wonderful people. I´m married since 2002 and I have two sons too. The older is 13 and the other is 11 both are great but I have to struggle with them day and night mainly because of their studies. Both practice many sports such as tennis, soccer, handball, and during the weekends we love spending our free time setting journey (setting out on a journey through, journeying through,driving through) in the countryside, but only in spring; in winter ( like now) we prefer to stay at home with our frinds and organize parties, which is great.

Excellent paragraph Silvia. Mostly there were only a few spellig mistakes.

My family.

Hello, my name is Silvia. I´m from Madrid but nowadays I live in Ciudad Real. When I moved here, I didn´t like it at all, but now I think it´s a great city with such wonderful people. I have been married since 2002 and I have two sons too. The oldest is 13 and the other is 11 both are great but I have to struggle with them day and night mainly because of their studies. Both practice many sports such as tennis, scoker(?) and handball, and at the weekends we love spending our free time in the countryside, but only in spring; in winter ( like now) we prefer to stay at home with our frinds and organise parties, which is great.

Hello Silvia,

I am glad that you like the place where you live, it is important for your peace of mind.

I changed 'I'm living' to 'I live' because the continuous form has a sense of a temporary situation and it sounds like you live their permanently now. In the second line when you talk about a state or activity which started in the past until now we often use the present perfect - have/has + 3rd form.

There is only one word that I didn't understand  - scoker, the only alternative I could think of is soccer.

Hope this helps

Bob