The second day of my holiday
today, I visit my grandparents who are my favorite person. They treat me best as always. My grandma cook tasty food for me,These are my favorit food, potato stew , pig‘s ear salad, salad three vegetable wire ,dumplings……I want to drool again. Hope god do better to them.I wish I could accompany them longer.
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The second day of my holiday
Today, I visited my grandparents, who are my favorite people. They always treat me the best. My grandma cooks tasty food for me. These are my favorite foods: potato stew, pig‘s ear salad, three vegetable salad (wire???), and dumplings. I am starting to drool again. I hope God does better for them. I wish I could be with them longer.
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The second day of my holiday
This day I will visit my grandparents who are my favorite persons. They will treat me best as always. My grandma will cook some tasty food for me.These are My favorite food is potato stew,pig‘s ear salad, salad three vegetable wire(wire is a cable it is no sense with your food) ,dumplings etc.I want to drool again It is better to write I drool over looking my granny's food or I drool over thinking my granny's food. I hope God do the best for them (or it is better I wish the God protect them everyday and keep them safe and healthy).I wish I could have much more time to accompany them longer.
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I think so , I spent munch time being with them every holiday which makes them happy. Everyone has different live, but only keeping the love in your heart, I believe them can feel it .
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You're a fortunate person, your grandparents are still alive. I've never seen my grandparents , they passed away many many years ago.
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