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今早我开心极了 今早我开心极了,因为我的儿子终于学会了如何拉完一条拉链。儿子十四岁,可是由于残疾,他的精细动作技能不太好。以前他只能拉上拉链,不能做第一步,所以我总是得把拉链的两边扣上,然后他才能拉上。但是,今天穿上外套之后,他竟然把外套上的拉链两边口上再拉了!他完全是自己做的!他一做完了,我就开始拍手喝彩,他也开始拍手。我告诉他他非常聪明,这看起来让他很开心。对大部分人,拉一条拉链不是一件很重要的事情,但是对我来说,这是非常重要,因为能拉一条拉链对他的独立非常重要的。 今天我为儿子感到特别骄傲。加油,儿子!你太聪明了!我爱你! I am extremely happy this morning because my son finally learnt how to do a zip completely. My son is 14, but because of his disabilities his fine motor skills are not very good. Before today, he was only able to pull up a zip, he couldn't do the first bit, so I always had to fasten the two sides of the zip together, and then he could pull it up. However, today, after putting on his coat, he suddenly fastened the zip together and then did it up! He did it all himself! As soon as he had done it up, I started cheering and clapping, he started clapping too. I told him he is really clever, and this seemed to make him very happy. To most people doing up a zip is not really an big issue, but for me it is very important. Being able to do up a zip is very important for his independence. Today I am especially proud of my son. Go on, son! You are so clever! I love you!

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今早我开心极了

今早我开心极了,因为我的儿子终于学会了如何拉完一条拉链。儿子十四岁,可是由于残疾,他做精细动作做得不太好。以前他只能拉上拉链,可是没法做第一步,所以我总是得把拉链的两边扣上,然后他才能拉上。但是,今天穿上外套之后,他竟然把外套上的拉链两边扣上再拉了!他完全是自己做的!他一做完,我就开始拍手喝彩,他也开始拍手。我告诉他他非常聪明,这看起来让他很开心。对大部分人,拉一条拉链不是一件很重要的事情,但是对我来说,这是非常重要,因为能拉一条拉链对他的独立是非常重要的。

今天我为儿子感到特别骄傲。加油,儿子!你太聪明了!我爱你!

I am extremely happy this morning because my son finally learnt how to do a zip completely. My son is 14, but because of his disabilities his fine motor skills are not very good. Before today, he was only able to pull up a zip, he couldn't do the first bit, so I always had to fasten the two sides of the zip together, and then he could pull it up. However, today, after putting on his coat, he suddenly fastened the zip together and then did it up! He did it all himself! As soon as he had done it up, I started cheering and clapping, he started clapping too. I told him he is really clever, and this seemed to make him very happy. To most people doing up a zip is not really an big issue, but for me it is very important. Being able to do up a zip is very important for his independence.

Today I am especially proud of my son. Go on, son! You are so clever! I love you!

 

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今早我开心极了

今早我开心极了,因为我的儿子终于学会了如何拉完一条拉链。儿子十四岁,可是由于残疾,他对一些的精细精准的动作技能掌握得不太好(or 不是很好)。以前他只能拉上把拉链拉上,但不能把它们扣起来做第一步,。所以我总是得把拉链的两边扣上,然后他才能拉上。但是,今天穿上外套(之)后,他竟然把外套上两边的拉链两边口上扣起来再又拉上了!他完全是自己做的!他一做完了,我就开始拍手喝彩,他也开始拍手。我告诉他他非常聪明,这看起来让他很开心。对大部分人来说,拉一条拉链不是一件很重要简单的事情,但是对于我来说,这是非常重要,。因为能拉一条拉链对他的独立能力来说是非常重要的。

今天,我特别为儿子感到特别骄傲。加油,儿子!你太聪明了!我爱你!

I am extremely happy this morning because my son finally learnt how to do a zip completely. My son is 14, but because of his disabilities his fine motor skills are not very good. Before today, he was only able to pull up a zip, he couldn't do the first bit, so I always had to fasten the two sides of the zip together, and then he could pull it up. However, today, after putting on his coat, he suddenly fastened the zip together and then did it up! He did it all himself! As soon as he had done it up, I started cheering and clapping, he started clapping too. I told him he is really clever, and this seemed to make him very happy. To most people doing up a zip is not really an big issue, but for me it is very important. Being able to do up a zip is very important for his independence.

Today I am especially proud of my son. Go on, son! You are so clever! I love you!

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Beth,我为此感到高兴:)

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