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A short story When I was more younger and my medium sister lived with me, we was always fighting like all brothers. She knew I had scared of spiders although she loves them. One day, she put one in my pocket jacket and when I put my hand in the pocket I shouted very loudly. After ten minutes, we was to have a dinner and she had already put other spider on my plate and when I saw it I threw all. But this not all, I was turning pale and I felt as my heart beat very fast that I fainted. Then, when I woke up my sister apologised because she didn't know that I was going to faint.

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A short story

When I was more younger and my middle sister lived with me, we were always fighting like all sisters do. She knew I was scared of spiders however she loved them.

One day, she put one in my jacket pocket and when I put my hand in the pocket I shouted very loudly. Ten minutes later, we were to have a dinner and she had already put another spider on my plate and when I saw it I threw down on the floor. But this was not all, I was also turning pale and I felt as my heart beat so fast that I fainted.

Then, when I woke up my sister apologised because she didn't know that I was going to faint.

 

Inglés no tiene "dobles comparaciones" No digas "more older" es simplemente "older".

No sé exactamente "medium sister", pero si tienes tres hermanas, la que tiene la edad en la mitad de las tres, ella es tu "middle sister". Supongo que te referieras a la altura también. No lo sé.

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A short story

When I was younger and my middle sister lived with me, we were always fighting like brothers. She knew I was scared of spiders even though she loves them.

One day, she put one in the pocket of my jacket and when I put my hand in the pocket I screamed very loudly. After ten minutes, we were going to have dinner and she had already put other spider on my plate and when I saw it I threw all. But this was not all, I was turning pale and I felt my heart beating very fast. Then I fainted.

When I woke up, my sister apologised because she didn't know that I was going to pass out.

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