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David Beckham changed the match => "changed the outcome of the match" sounds better
The atmosphere before the match was heated. The English national team seemed full of confidence and energy to win. However, when the actual game took place, the German team scored 4 goals and was leading the game.
The English team looked like they are->were losing hope for the win.
Still, when David beckham was sent into the match, the outlook of the game was not hopeful for the English team. However when he scored 2 more goals, he changed the possibility of the team to win from hopeless to hopeful. When he finally scored 2 more goals making the game as 4 to 4 draw, the English team started to lead the atmosphere of the match in the lead. (무슨 말인지 잘 모르겠어요)
They finally scored a 5th goal, the winning goal! David beckham changed the game !!!
Instead of "English team" you can use "Team of England"
Thanks , I would appreciate if you can help me out with corrections
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