are we too dependent on mobile phones? Discuss

When I bought my first mobile 6 years ago, I did not suspect that, nowadays, I would depend on my mobile so much.
A big part of my life is in my mobile: photos, videos, contacts, my calendar with all my appointments...
And besides, there are a lot of apps, such as players, facebook, twitter... Then when I have free time, for example, when I am waiting for the bus, I take my smartphone and play.
And, yes, I depend on my smartphone. Although, there are days when I turn it off.
I think that a smartphone is a great facility and to give up this one thing that make our life easier is difficult.

Hello Isabel,

Interesting text about smartphones, I don't think many of us realise quite how indispensable they become when we first buy them!

Just a few small corrections,

Bob

Are we too dependent on mobile phones? Discuss

When I bought my first mobile 6 years ago, I did not suspect that, nowadays, I would depend so much on my mobile.

Sounds more natural to me to say that way.

A big part of my life is in my mobile: photos, videos, contacts, my calendar with all my appointments...

And besides, there are a lot of apps, such as: plays (Do you mean Google Play?), Facebook, Twitter....Then And when I have free time, for example, like when I am waiting for the bus, I take out my smartphone and play mobile games. And, yes, I depend on my smartphone. Although, there are days that I turn off it.

I think that a smartphones is a are great facility and give up one thing that make ours life easier, it is difficult.

I think that the smartphone is a great device, one that makes our lives easier. To give it up, I think, would be a very difficult thing to do.

I'm not sure about other English-speaking countries, but in the United States and Canada it's more common to mention mobile phones as cellphones or smartphones, but you could refer to them as phones too.