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PIRATE OF THE CARIBBEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pirate of the Caribben is a terrific film setting in the most exuberant places around the would such as The Turtle Islan placed in Haiti, Port Royal in Jamaica and a wonderful place invented for the story calling The Dead Island. On the other hand, the films couldn’t be posible without the colaboration of the widely, convincingly and sensitively acted by Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow, the one pirate who knows to make us to die to laugther. Also, Orlando Bloom as Will Turner, the heroical man saving to Elizabeth Swam, who is the Goberment of Port Royal. We need to mention who is interpreted by Keira Knightly. The first installment revolves around Elizabeth Swamm, daugther of the Goberment og the Port Royal Island, who is trapped by The Black Pearl’s pirates. In addition to this, a guy whose name Will Turner will try to sabe to the love of his all childhood, Elizabeth Swam. But he won’t be able to get the plan out without the help of Jack Sparrow, one pirate who will hate with all his passion. So, the two men live the most exciting adventure never forget. The glamur films was posible by the genius of Gore Verbiski and widely reproduced by all the televion networks, particularly in Disney Chanel. Also beautifully performanced in the Caribbean. All in all, if you want to see one of the most terrific films that you have never seen, you jawst have one alternative, Pirate of the Caribbean.

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PIRATE OF THE CARIBBEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pirate of the Caribben is a terrific film setting in the most exotic places around the would such as Turtle Island in Haiti, Port Royal in Jamaica and a wonderful place invented for the story called Dead Island. On the other hand, the film wouldn’t be possible without the collaboration of the widely, convincing and sensitively acting by Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow, the one pirate who knows how to make us to die of laughter. Also, Orlando Bloom as Will Turner, the hero saving to Elizabeth Swam, who is the Governor of Port Royal. We need to mention  that she is interpreted by Keira Knightly.
The first installment revolves around Elizabeth Swamm, daughter of the Governor of Port Royal Island, who is trapped by Black Pearl’s pirates. In addition to this, a guy whose name is Will Turner, will try to save the love of his childhood, Elizabeth Swam. But he won’t be able to make his plan succeed without the help of Jack Sparrow, one pirate who he will hate with all his passion. So, the two men live the most exciting adventure which you will never forget.
The glamour in the films was made possible by the genius of Gore Verbiski and widely broadcast by all the televison networks, particularly the Disney Channel. Also beautifully performed in the Caribbean.
All in all, if you want to see one of the most terrific films that you will ever see, you just have one choice, Pirates of the Caribbean.

 

Hello Dennis,

This is a nice review of  very popular film. You have talked about the characters and the plot and given a good recommendation. 

 

There are several corrections but quite a few of these are spelling mistakes! Other problems are missing words. If you take a little more care and read your notebook before you post it, I feel you will avoid a lot of these corrections.

 

All the best

 

Bob

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