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My introduction Hi,I'm Noryco living in in Tokyo.I'm an architect designer. Likes,,,snowboading,watch the baseball games(with beer),nail art,cooking,eating,especially travel! Countries I have been are Germany,France,Italia,Holland,Belguim,America,Vietnum,Cambodia,HongKong.Every countries were so nice. I want to learn English because I want to be able to take a conversation with foreign people. On italki,I seach for langage exchange friend,friend,and English teacher.(My English is beginner level.) Feel free to send message if you interested in me.

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My introduction

Hi,I'm Noryco living in in Tokyo.I'm an architect designer.

I like snowboarding, watching baseball games(with beer), nail art, cooking, eating and especially travelling!
Countries I have been to are Germany, France, Italy, Holland, Belgium, America, Vietnam, Cambodia and HongKong. Every country was so nice.
I want to learn English because I want to be able to have a conversation with foreign people.

On italki, I am searching for a language exchange friend, friend and English teacher.(My English is beginner level.)
Feel free to send me a message if you are interested in me.

 

Hello Noriko and welcome to italki,

 

Your introduction is very nice, most of the mistakes are simple spelling mistakes and there are signs of some higher level language here! Remember that in English we always put a space after the comma or full stop. They are there to tell us to take a breath! The verb 'search' is always followed by 'to', so it is better to learn them as a pair.

 

All the best

 

Bob 

 

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