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I finish te high school, what wiil do I? Well, that is the year what I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I choose be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course on college of administration. My classes on the course of flight attendant start next monday, and Im very excited. So, what you do? Are you a student too?

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I finish the high school, what will i do?

Well, this is the year in which I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I choose to be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course at college of administration. My classes on the course of flight attendant start in next monday, and i'm very excited. So, what do you do? Are you a student too?

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Well done Ana. Please see some corrections that I have made below.

The main area to develop is "word order" - making sure you try to learn the way that sentences are structured in English, that may be different to just translating from Portuguese.  However, I could perfectly understand everything that you wanted to say!

Good luck with the flight attendant course - how exciting!

Tom


When I finish high school, what will I do?

Well, this is the year in which I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I have chosen to be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course at the College of Administration. My flight attendant classes start next Monday, and I'm very excited. So, what do you do? Are you a student too?


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I finish the high school, what will I do?

Well, this is the year in which I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I choose to be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course at college of administration. My classes on the course of flight attendant start in next monday, and i'm very excited. So, what do you do? Are you a student too?

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