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I finish the high school, what will i do?
Well, this is the year in which I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I choose to be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course at college of administration. My classes on the course of flight attendant start in next monday, and i'm very excited. So, what do you do? Are you a student too?
Well done Ana. Please see some corrections that I have made below.
The main area to develop is "word order" - making sure you try to learn the way that sentences are structured in English, that may be different to just translating from Portuguese. However, I could perfectly understand everything that you wanted to say!
Good luck with the flight attendant course - how exciting!
Tom
When I finish high school, what will I do?
Well, this is the year in which I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I have chosen to be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course at the College of Administration. My flight attendant classes start next Monday, and I'm very excited. So, what do you do? Are you a student too?I finish the high school, what will I do?
Well, this is the year in which I have to plan what I will do in my future life. I choose to be a flight attendant, but also I will do a course at college of administration. My classes on the course of flight attendant start in next monday, and i'm very excited. So, what do you do? Are you a student too?
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