I´m a Venezuelan boy

Hi, I´m a venezuelan boy, i live in Caracas city, Venezuela´s capital.
I *was born in Barquisimeto´s State, the temperature is very very *hot, it´s *one of the reasons why i move to caracas. I like the beach, mountains, rivers, and to help people. I think that i´m a good person.

Actually, in my country there a lot problems: political, economic, social... a lot. And i pray for the best relationship between venezuelans and Politics.

---en un parte tu dijiste, "very very high" y en espanol eso quiere decir que la clima es muy muy alto, pero en ingles se escucha un poquito raro, el correcto en ingles es usar "caliente--hot." 

--Razon=reason

--cuando usaste "because" no era correcto porque esta enfrente de la razon. Para usar "because" corectamente necesitas ponerlo despues de la frase--> I moved to Caracas, becasue it is very hot. 

espero que esto te ayuda! 

I´m a Venezuelan boy

Actually, in my country there are a lot problems: politic, economic, social... a lot. And I pray for the best relationships venezuelans and Politics.

I´m a Venezuelan Boy

Hi! I'm a Venezuelan boy and I live in Caracas City, Venezuela´s capital.
I was born in Barquisimeto State. The temperature in that place  there is very very high. That is one of the reasons that I moved to Caracas. I like the beach, mountains, rivers, and I like to help people. I think that I'm a good person.

Actually, in my country there a lot problems: political, economic, social... a lot. I pray for a better relationship between Venezuelans and their politics in the future.

****Just a few corrections. Always capital letters for nationality, Peruvian, American, Colombian, etc.

****The word "I" (yo) always capital letter.