good morning
I didn't go to work today. I'm at home now. For resting. But I will go to afternoon.
I want to speak of weekend. At the weekend I went to English course after went to theatre. Performance was name "Shekaspeare in a jam" It was comedy so I laughed my tits off. Really successful performer was there. After then I went to home.
Yesterday I went to my rehearsal. We practised our rolles. My role will comedy.The husband and the wife who constantly fight. I will be wife. I hope everyting will be fine.
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good morning
I didn't go to work today. I'm at home now. For just resting. But I will go to this afternoon.
I want to speak of about my weekend. At the weekend I went to an English course and after I went to the theatre. The performance was name called "Shekaspeare in a jam" It was a comedy so I laughed my tits off. A really successful performer was there. After then that I went to home.
Yesterday I went to my rehearsal. We practised our rolles roles. My role will be comedy.The husband and the wife who constantly fight. I will be the wife. I hope everyting will be fine.
Hi, this is really good, but take a look at your use of articles, this probably needs some revision of the rules. Also "I laughed my tits off" is a slang expression which is great to use with friends, but avoid using in a more formal situation. Well done!
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Hello Nilay, seems you had a nice weekend, anyway I can not add any corrections after the great corrections the Tutor Katie made, although I might need some corrections hehe.
I hope that we can help each other practising.
Cheers
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