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dragon boat festival tomorrow is the traditional holiday which we called dragon boat festival. our family haven't meet each other about half year, so we go home today, and will have the festival together tomorrow! and now, we are staying together and chating, say something about our jobs, our living, and our opinion on football! and of course, we had take the rice dumpling this dinner, which is made by my mother, it is so delicious!!! i love it!

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谢谢，呵呵，因为一直觉得自己在语法和写作上不上档次，加上很久没进修了，就一直沿用自己的最简单的口语形式在随写，让你见笑了，以后还请多多指教，谢谢！端午节快乐。。。
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英文的写作和口语是不同的，尽量避免在写作当中使用口语化的字眼。另外，如果你是要描述今天已经发生的事，最好还是用过去式来写这篇文章比较好!个人的一点建议，欢迎赐教
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Dragon Boat Festival

Tomorrow is the traditional holiday which we is called dragon boat festival. Our family haven't met each other for about half year, so we go come home today, and will have the festival together tomorrow!

and Now, we are staying together and chatting, say something talking about our jobs, our living, and our opinion on football!

and Of course, we had take  have the rice dumplings   this dinner, which were made by my mother for dinner, it is so delicious!!! I love it!

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