"The Whte Wasteland 5"

I try to write this note in present tense.

For long time we have been going across the white wasteland. I'm tired, I'm very tired' I want to sleep. At the same moment Goran, walking in front of us, calls out:
"I see an unknown Settlement!"
"We haven't been here before! Surely the Settlement is unknown for us" Carlos said.
I want to tell you about Carlos. He is the a very disagreeable person. I didn't like him from the beginning. He and his mates Raul and Silvio have been making problems for us since they joined us. Goran didn't like them too either. Others think (that) we need to be together. Maybe they opine think if we are more (people) we are stronger. Goran, James and me I disagree with them. We want our band must to be friendly.
"Hold your jaw tongue, please" said James
"How can you talk..."
"Thank you for understanding. Keep silent, please"
A short time ago we approached the settlement. It looks like it was abandoned years ago...

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Good with present tense except some uses of 'have been' (present perfect tense).

"The White Wasteland 5"

I am trying to write this note in present tense.

For a long time, we have been going across the white wasteland. I'm tired, I'm very tired'. I want to go to sleep.

At the same moment time, Goran is walking in front of us and called out:
"I see saw an unknown Settlement!"
"We haven't been here before! Sure Of course, the Settlement is unknown for to us" Carlos said.
I want to tell you about Carlos. He is the a very disagreeable/obnoxious person. I didn't do not like him from the begining start. He and him his teammates, Raul and Silvio has have been making problems for us since they joined us. Goran didn't like them too. The rest Others think thought (that) we need to be together. Maybe they thought that  opine if we there are more (people)/ of us, we are will be stronger. Goran, James and me I disagree with them. We want our band must to be friendly.
"Hold your jaw tongue, please" said James.
"How can you talk..."
"Thank you for understanding. Keep silence  Be/Stay quiet, please"
A short time ago After a short while, we have approached reached the settlement. It looks like it has been abandoned for years ago...

This is actually a nice story. Did you write them yourself? Keep it up to practice english further. Do a lot of readings too. It helps!