First essay

Nowadays children are facing more pressures from academic, social and commercial perspectives. Let's discuss about the causes and what we can do to reducing reduce the pressure for them.
Firstly, the most reasonable to address that is parent's expectations. They put children in the tied-up schedules to for studying.. For example after school times, chiden have to go to extra classes at night / on weekends.. Parents want the kid to have the good academic results.
Secondly, children are likely finding friends, they might be advoided by children peers [I don't understand this part]. They might do things even they don't want to do it or they might do negative things just because they have a chance to join the peers ...
Finally, children are easily attracted by toys and video games. By watching TV and using smartphones, ipads.. They might feel stressed in order to have it those things for them self themselves.
By discussing these causes, we can address out some solutions to slow that problem such as:
- Keeping balance between studying and relaxing. Having conversations, listening to them , giving advices ...and being their friend.
- Sumbut [not a real word] the hours for them to watch TV and playing games. Balance outdoor and indoor activities.
These are 3 basicly reasons for the rise in heavy pressures on children nowadays. The problems could be slowed by a variety of measures from parents, schools, and authorities.