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Nowadays, more and more parents want their children to  learn a foreign language ,which would be a very helpful skills in their future lives advantageous for their children's future(s)).Obviously ,the earlier (or sooner) a child learnS a foreign language the more benefits he /she would get (the more beneficial it is to him or her OR the more the more benefits he or she reaps) .

Maybe there are some people consist that it would be better to let a children began  (out there who believe that it would be better for their children) to study a new language when they are older,or when they wen they go (you're using the present tense, so you need to be consisent 您使用现在时态，所以你应该一致) to, for example, when they are  in secondary school (no comma) for the period that they could have a better comprehension and learning ability ,although their concerns need to be acknowledged or understood ,I think they are perhaps oversimplifying the situation here  (This sentence is very difficult to understand (during the time in which they would have better comprehension skills and better learning abilities.  Although I acknowledge and understand their reasoning, their reasoning is questionable) .It has been showed (shown) by research that to master (mastering) a foreign language the ,or evenbest time to study is during primary school before the school age   (mastering a foreign language during or before a child is in elementary/primary school is best. 

As a tool for communication ,The purpose for people to use a language is to communicate with others in daily life,while the foreign language teaching curriculum at primary school is INtended to experience the linguistic ambience by getting close to daily expression and creating students interests to study rather than focus on examinations which is WHAT  secondary schools ARE more likely to do .Therefore ,that would be a good way to inspire children 's interests to learn a foreign language .   This paragraph needs work. I understand what you are trying to say, but a good deal of work is needed to bring clarity to your paragraph .  Try to simplify your sentences.  

While when I was learning English I always be   ( I was always told) by an excellent teacher that the best way would  to learn a language is to make yourself as a baby  (imagine youself as a baby) because babies are exposed to their language from infancy. For instance ,each native speakers could speak their(speaks because it's singular) (his or her) mother tongue very well (no comma necessary before the word ) they were balso because they began to study language when abies because  he or she is exposed to a language from the time he or she is born).

Keep improving. I understand the sentiments that you are trying to convey.  You're on your way. If you need help, I will help.