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My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements Nowadays, you can see all kinds of advertisements everywhere. Almost all of them are full of colors. Once you see them, you want to get the production in them. Some advertisements are true and their productions are worthy of consumers' attention. But many advertisements are not real. In order to make more profit, many manufacturers overstate their production's advantages. This kind of advertisements always mislead consumers and do much harm to them. For example, some false medicine advertisements give big hope to those patients. What a patient wants most is health doubtlessly. When they buy the medicine, they will finally find that they are cheated. It's obviously one disaster after another for them. For another example, false advertisements lead to less trust between people. Most people will be very careful after being cheated time after time. They will choose a doubt attitude towards everything. To sum up, false advertisements are immoral, on the one hand we should learn how to distinguish false advertisements. On the other hand, our government should take some measure to punish those manufacturers who make false advertisements. Only in this way can we keep a healthy consume market.

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My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements

Nowadays, you can see all kinds of advertisements everywhere. Almost all of them are full of colors. Once you see them, you want to get the products in them. Some advertisements are true and their products are worthy of consumers' attention. But many advertisements are not real.

In order to make more profit, many manufacturers overstate their product's advantages. These kind of advertisements always mislead consumers and do much harm to them. For example, some false medicine advertisements give big hope to those patients. What a patient wants most is health without doubt. When they buy the medicine, they will finally find that they have been cheated. It's obviously one disaster after another for them. For another example, false advertisements lead to less trust between people. Most people will be very careful after being cheated time after time. They will have a suspicious attitude towards everything.

To sum up, false advertisements are immoral, on the one hand we should learn how to distinguish false advertisements. On the other hand, our government should take some measure to punish those manufacturers who make false advertisements. Only in this way can we keep a healthy consumer market.

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