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New story Onc upon a time , ther was a family lived in poor life . They wanted to have much money to live . Smoeday , the father wanted to find a work , then he heared that there is a competition about caring a plant and the winner will give him a money . The father was happy , and he decided to join it Next morning , the ministre distribute grains to participants and they started to work . After that , the father did something possible to care a plant , but it didn't grew up !!! , he felt screared , so he tought what should he do ? , but in vain . After a year , each participant gave the plant to the minister only the father . The ministre saw him and smiled . After while he rised his finger and appointed to the father '' you are a winer because the grains who i gave you are invalid '' Every participant shocked and the father becam happy .

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Once upon a time , there was a family that lived a poor life. They wanted to have more money to live .

One day, the father wanted to find a work , and heard that there was a competition about caring for a plant and the winner would get some money .
The father was happy , and he decided to enter.

The next morning , the minister distributed grains to the participants and they started to work .
After that , the father did everything possible to care for/grow a plant , but it didn't grow up !!! He felt scared , so he wondered what to do ? But it was in vain .


After a year , each participant gave the plant to the minister only the father??? This doesn't make any sense and i'm not sure what you're trying to say.  .
The minister saw him and smiled . After while he raised his finger and appointed to the father, and said '' you are the winner because the grains (that) i gave you were invalid ''

Every other participant was shocked and the father became happy .

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so pleaaaaaase help me guys :,(

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