Essay - about cars

Topic: It is a good idea to have a car?

In the last weeks there weere has been a lot of news in on the television which complains complaining that cars are too bad for our environment. But are cars really bad for us?

On the one hand cars producs C02 which destroys the environment. Because of the CO2 out our world heats up. The conclusion of that case is thate the level of the oceans will also increase. So the citys cities which are in the near of the ocean will flood/will be flooded [swamps up will flood, a swamp is not the same thing] As example Hamburg would be one of this citys these cities .

On the other hand it is good to have a car because most of the employers only want employees who already have a license and a car. If you live far away from the work you need a car to reach it. And your also need it also if you have to be [better than "must" here] flexible.

The most important arguement for having a car is that you are mobile and independent from others. In case of an emergency you are mobile to drive to the next hospital. You dont have to wait for others or a taxi. This is especially important if any every second counts. [good phrase]

The postive aspects outweigh the negative ones. But it is also important to take care about out environment.

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Excellent English.  I know there are lots of small mistakes but you are working at a high level and the mistakes are very small.

Essay - about cars

Topic: It is a good idea to have a car?

In the last weeks there weere has been a lot of news in the television which complains that that complain cars are to bad for our environment. But are cars really bad for us?

On the one hand cars producs C02 which destroys the environment. Because of the CO2 causes out our world to heats up. The conclusion of that case is thate the level of the ocean also increases, so the critys cities which are in the near of the ocean swamps up. As For example, Hamburg would be on of this citys these cities.

On the other hand it is good to have a car because most of the employers only want employees who already have a license and a car. If you live far away from the your work/job u you would need a car to reach it, and also to And your need it also if you must be flexible.

The most important arguement for having a car is that you are mobile and independent from others. In case of an emergency you are mobile to drive to the next hospital; you don't have to wait for others or a taxi. This is especially important if any second counts.

The postive aspects outweigh the negative ones, but it is also important to take care about our environment.

Essay - about cars

Topic: It is a good idea to have a car?

In the last weeks there weere were a lot of news in the television which complains that cars are to bad for our environment. But are cars really bad for us?

On the one hand cars producs C02 which destroys the environment. Because of the CO2 out world heats up. The conclusion of that case is that the level of the ocean also increase. So the critycs cities which are in the near of the ocean swamps up. As For example, Hamburg would be on of this cities.

On the other hand is good to have a car because most of the employers only want employees who already have a license and a car. If you live far away from the work u need a car to reach it. And you need it also if you must be flexible.

The most important arguement for having a car is that you are mobile and independet from others. In case of an emergency you are mobile to drive to the next hospital. You don't have to wait for others or a taxi. This is especially important if any second counts.

The postive aspects outweigh the negative ones. But it is also important to take care about our environment.