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My Day
It is the first diary in 2016. The life is full of happy and sorrow. Let me share you with them. The pleasant thing is that my dear cousin has got married in January. We are so happy for her. Unluckily, one of my uncle fell off the ladder while he was working in the factory. Everyone seems sad for him (Everyone got sad for him). He has to stay in the hospital for three months (If the sentence is in the past: He stayed in the hospital during three months). Then my younger sister turns eight in this year and begins her new classes. I hope that she seldom be absent-minded at class. In the end, I have been in America several months. Only when I begin my college life do I realize the importance of English (If the sentence is in the future: I WILL realize...). I shall study harder at English.
This is a story. Thanks for your revising.
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