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My brother My brother has 23 years old. I'm 20. He has a little problem with the drugs. He works (or worked) in the public transport and they pay good money. But all those money, he smokes it. Recently we live alone in the house, while my parents go to travel. The problem are their friends (they are thugs and they are ruining the lives of my brother). He tries to put their friends inside the house, but I can't allow that. So, in my vacations, I'm a Watchmen :v Yeah, my brother is weak of character. Thanks for you corrections :D

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My brother

My brother has is 23 years old. I'm 20. He has a little problem with the drugs. He works (or worked) in the public transportation and they pay good money. But all those that money, he smokes it. Recently we have been live living alone in the house, while my parents go to travel. The problem are is their friends (they are thugs and they are ruining the lives of my brother). He tries to put let their friends inside the house, but I can't allow that. So, in during my vacations, I'm a Watchman :v

Yeah, my brother is weak of character.

Thanks for you corrections :D

Good work Santiago.  Una palabras - whose friends?  The friends of your parents?  Or the friends of your brother?

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My brother

My brother is 23 years old. I'm 20. He has a little problem with drugs. He works (or worked) in public transportion and they pay good money but all that money, he smokes it. he uses that money to smoke. Recently we have been living alone in the house, while my parents go traveling. The problem is his friends (they are thugs and they are ruining the life of my brother). He tries to put his friends inside the house, but I can't allow that. So, on my vacation, I'm a watchmen :v

Yeah, my brother has weak in character.

Thanks for your corrections :D

 

 

****I have the same question. Do you mean your brother's friend's or your parent's friends? I corrected it as if the "thugs" are your brother's friends.

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My brother

My brother has is 23 years old. I'm 20. He has a little problem with the drugs. He works (or worked) in the public transport and they pay good money. But all those money, he smokes it. Recently we live have been living alone in the house, while my parents go to travel. The problem are is their friends (they are thugs and they are ruining the lives of my brother). He tries to put let their friends inside the house, but I can't allow that. So, in during my vacations, I'm a Watchman :v

Yeah, my brother is weak of in character.

Thanks for your corrections :D

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