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My plans to 2016 It's always the same thing, when a new year starts we do plans like study more, make a diet, do more exercises but almost always in the end of year we are as we begun. But in this year will be different. I trace my plans and I'll do what I planned. In 2016 definitively I'll be fluent in English. Yeah, it is my main goal. I use English everyday but still I'm not fluent because is a very technical English and sometimes I feel unconfortable to write/speak with my job partners. My second goal is lose weight. I'm not very fat but is better to my health that I lose weight. I'll make a diet and do exercises everyday. I think that theses are my plans for 2016, and I hope that in 2017 a have differents plans and that you turn true yours. Thanks :)

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My plans for 2016

It's always the same thing, when a new year starts we make plans like study more, go on a diet, do more exercises, but almost always by the end of year we are back to where we started.

But in this year will be different. I'll stick to my plans and I'll do what I planned. (or: and I'll achieve my goals.) 

In 2016 definitively I'll become fluent in English. Yeah, it is my main goal. I use English everyday but still I'm still not fluent because I use very technical English and sometimes I feel unconfortable to writing/speaking with my job partners (work collegues).

My second goal is to lose weight. I'm not very fat but it's better for my health that I lose weight. I'll make a diet plan and do exercises everyday.

I think that theses are my plans for 2016.and I hope that in 2017 I'll have differents plans and that yours come true yours.

Thanks :)

 

 

Well done mate, good but of writing. The mistakes were basically all prepositions, incorrect verbs and nouns, and occasionally word order. Good luck achieving your goals this year! :)

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A great revolution I am learning English as well, cheer up!

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